the first and third images seem the most genuine and the second and fourth seem more theatrical. the lighting is very dramatic and works with both scenarios (genuine and theatrical). the images in which the tv is not as prominent seem to be more dramatic and more purposeful in their construction. if the tv was important in the scene for some reason, maybe it should be a more integral part of the frame?
the third image has a great overall aesthetic. i also feel that it is strong and that you are emerging from a dark state of mind. maybe work with your surroundings a bit more; use the window, wall, etc.
I like the diversity of expression that you have portrayed. The lighting from the window provides good contrast. If I were to change anything I may push the lighting further. The third image shown has a dark left side; it would be interesting to do that in the other three images as well.
I think all of your images are very interesting. The light you added really helped the scene. I think it could be more interesting if you increased the contrast.
I like that you included multiple images rather than just one because they really are like film stills. I also really like the natural light that you used because that's how it would look in a film.
I like the range of photos in your set. It looks like I'm watching a possession or something. The light is very soft and somber. My only complaint is the TV in the background, it steals my attention.
I can so easily imagine a storyline to go with these images! Something to consider would be to add an unexpected element to the scene to give more context and interest
the first and third images seem the most genuine and the second and fourth seem more theatrical. the lighting is very dramatic and works with both scenarios (genuine and theatrical). the images in which the tv is not as prominent seem to be more dramatic and more purposeful in their construction. if the tv was important in the scene for some reason, maybe it should be a more integral part of the frame?
ReplyDeletethe third image has a great overall aesthetic. i also feel that it is strong and that you are emerging from a dark state of mind. maybe work with your surroundings a bit more; use the window, wall, etc.
ReplyDeleteI like the diversity of expression that you have portrayed. The lighting from the window provides good contrast. If I were to change anything I may push the lighting further. The third image shown has a dark left side; it would be interesting to do that in the other three images as well.
ReplyDeleteI think all of your images are very interesting. The light you added really helped the scene. I think it could be more interesting if you increased the contrast.
ReplyDeleteI like that you included multiple images rather than just one because they really are like film stills. I also really like the natural light that you used because that's how it would look in a film.
ReplyDeleteI like the range of photos in your set. It looks like I'm watching a possession or something. The light is very soft and somber. My only complaint is the TV in the background, it steals my attention.
ReplyDeleteI can so easily imagine a storyline to go with these images! Something to consider would be to add an unexpected element to the scene to give more context and interest
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